Please help -ESL teacher - What is wrong with the following sentence?


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Hard-Worker asked:


Dear English / ESL teachers:

Please help me correct the following sentence and point out the incorrect part. Thanks a million

“Whoever comes to the party needs to take the ticket with him. “

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4 Responses to “Please help -ESL teacher - What is wrong with the following sentence?”

  1. Susan w Says:
    January 12th, 2010 at 7:07 am

    Did your teacher say there is a mistake in the sentence, or can it be correct? Susan w

  2. avfc41 Says:
    January 14th, 2010 at 11:08 pm

    “with himself”, maybe? It sounds right, though. avfc41

  3. Mike T's - Miguel Says:
    January 16th, 2010 at 7:49 pm

    whoever comes to the party needs to take the ticket with them. Mike T’s - Miguel

  4. allison l Says:
    January 18th, 2010 at 6:55 pm

    I think there should be a coma after party,but I’m no teacher. allison l

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